https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1yO1q2Ijwk
I kept my pitch very similar to the original version. some of the feedback i received was that the idea was very innovative and the liked how i made it relevant. some of the feedback i received was that they provided me with background info on the high heel to state the importance of this need for women and how long its been a problem. i also received a question for how it would be made or implemented. so in my second attempt i tried to maintain my level of comfort in my tone and delivery as well as my eagerness about the product. i also even when adding in these new info and changes i tried to stay as close to the 60 secs as i could.
Good job speaking clearly and getting your idea across. You did a good job of giving me a mental picture of what the problem is that you are trying to solve. I think that some data on the issue would help your cause. Maybe telling us how many women where heels each day, how many don't where heels simply because they are uncomfortable. Great job!!!
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ReplyDeleteGood job adjusting your pitch to address some of the feedback you got. It was really helpful that you explained how the heel would actually work and addressed how you want to keep the product trendy at the same time. I agree with Brett that some statistics would make your pitch even more powerful, but overall good job!
Really good job on your pitch. I thoroughly enjoyed watching it and listening to you.
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